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Review: Town Smokes by Pinkney Benedict

  • Writer: Liam Wilson
    Liam Wilson
  • Apr 4
  • 2 min read

It's good. Another anthology of short stories set in Southern Appalachia, written by a West Virginia author. I'm particularly in awe of the way he switches voices so easily; yes, it's an anthology, but all his characters feel well-rounded and like complete people dropped into the story from outside it. He shows so many microcosms of Appalachian life, and they all feel incredibly genuine. The story All the Dead touched me specifically because of the voice it's written in— how wonderful it is to see a character that talks like me that isn't made to be a joke, or less of a person. I also liked the wild hog story; the imagery was fantastic, and I could vividly see the whole story— probably because it reminds me of the holler much of my family used to live in, rabbits and all. (Reminder: naming your meat rabbits is a terrible idea!) Old men drinking beer on a sunken-in porch, listening to an old radio made around the year they were born. Us kids would always sit at their feet, enraptured at their commentary on the radio and the stories they spun again and again. And, it's realistic; doesn't skip over the casual abuse, casual violence cemented as a mere fact of life. You struggle, you bleed, everything is covered in dirt and grime and the walls are falling down around you. Benedict's writing is visceral in the original sense, in that it's guts and gore and all the grossness inherent in living. It's not hopeful, but it seems content with its lot, or at least accepting of it. Reading it is like just walking off your porch, with all the good and bad it entails. Anyway, a content warning for violence against women, animals, just people in general, etc. I give it a 7.5/10. (And, of course, I wanted to highlight the dog stuff. The Telltale Heart meets Moby Dick, escalating over a couple of days in an Appalachian trailer park, localized to one man's porch.)



The dog was off its feet, tried to struggle up but couldn't. It thrashed in the leaves, heaved its weight. It whined.
Eldridge pulled himself forward. He sighted down the blued barrel on the dog.
It managed to get on its feet, but the hind legs were shaky. The dog wheeled to face Eldridge, showed its teeth at him. A loop of saliva hung from its long snout. It presented its chest like it wasn't afraid, like it wanted the bullet. Most animals could smell guns Eldridge knew.

Eldridge didn't know what a sick dog would dream about when it had found the dark place where it wanted to die.
The dog whined and at first the whine was a high sound like a mosquito that is close to your ear. Then it was louder, a wail like some ghost, and Eldridge sat up in bed. 
"Goddam," he said. He listened to the dog howling.
The dog was in a strange position, half on its back, one front leg sticking up in the air. Its thick gray tongue was pushed out of its mouth, looked dry. Eldridge put the pistol on the damp ground next to him. He felt tired.
He clicked the flashlight off. In the dark the dog was just a hump. He closed his eyes. 
"Didn' have nobody in the world to take up for you, did you," he said. If they left the dog under the trailer, he knew the digger beetles would come and bury it, lots more than just the one he had seen.


 
 
 

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